Internet Access IELTS Writing Task 2 - LELB Society

 Access 

 IELTS Writing Task 2

🗒 Topic:

Nowadays, even young  have access to the internet, which is most of the time unsupervised.
Discuss the social and behavioral problems that might arise from this type of internet access without any . 

👤 Essayist: Sasan

Today, the [1] is ubiquitous among not only adults but also children. So, the lack of[2] parental monitoring[3] gives rise to some behavioral and  which are going to be brought to light in this essay.
Focusing on the , although the internet has myriads of pluses, it may affect children negatively, especially when it is not supervised by caregivers. In fact, children are native[4] and can be harmed by cyberbullying, child-inappropriate content, etc. For instance,  create an atmosphere in which some cruel people abuse children. So, unlimited internet use by children could be injurious to children[5]. Moreover, some content on the internet can impact on children terribly. As an example, the websites that release and advertise pornographic material have nothing didactic to offer children. Consequently, children can be harmed by surfing the net without confines[6].
Furthermore, the internet can provoke troubles in children’s conduct. These days, some movies are accessible on the net which are violent, most of which make children pugnacious and quarrelsome. As a result, sometimes, children engage in some evil activities such as shooting their fellows in schools[7]which costs[8] their own life. Another example that merits consideration is about the [9]. In fact, some children waste a huge amount of their time on the net which is detrimental to their  and assignments.
To sum up, unlimited children’s internet use could bring about some social and behavioral problems which are damaging to their life.

✅ Assessment:

  • Coherence: Perfect
  • Cohesion: Great
  • Grammar: Good
  • Reasoning: Flawless
  • Essay Analysis:
  • Word Count: “245” Good

📂 Study the growing archive of our IELTS Writing Task 2.

📺 Free English lessons on YouTube & Aparat, 📷 English flashcards on Instagram and Telegram

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Artificial Intelligence IELTS Listening and Reading Practice

Image
Artificial Intelligence  IELTS Listening and Reading Practice Artificial Intelligence  IELTS  Listening and Reading Practice Selected Text (below 500 words) Source :  http://www.hansonrobotics.com/ Sophia  is Hanson Robotics’ latest and most  advanced robot  to date and a cultural icon. She has become a media darling, appearing on major media outlets  around the world , igniting the interest of people  regardless of  age, gender, and culture, even gracing the cover of one of the top fashion magazines.  Her press coverage has a  potential  reach of over ten billion readers in 2017. Sophia is a highly sought-after speaker in business and showed her prowess and great  potential  across many industries. She has met face-to-face with key decision makers in banking, insurance, auto manufacturing, property development, media, and entertainment.  In addition , she has appeared onstage as a panel member and presenter in high-level conferences, covering how robotics and artificial int
Read more

Sociocultural Theory in Language Learning - LELB Society

Sociocultural Theory in Language Learning Sociocultural theory is based on work by the Russian psychologist, Vygotsky , and represents a fundamentally different way of looking at language and learning. Sociocultural theory is grounded in the ontology of the social individual. A sociocultural approach considers language and, by extension, second language acquisition as contextually situated and is concerned with situational language as it relates to internal processes (Gass & Selinker, 2008). Sociocultural theory goes around four basic principles as: Mediation: Mediation is the most important of these, because sociocultural theory rests on the assumption that human activity is mediated by what are known as symbolic artifacts (higher-level cultural tools) such as language and literacy and by material artifacts. These artifacts mediate the relationship between humans and the social and material world around us. Within sociocultural theory , humans use symbols as
Read more